野餐

約美惠和慧雯來吃晚飯
吃飯前大家都還很飽
所以美惠提議出去外面野餐
大家在Sioto River看夕陽,吃飯
外面空氣比較好, 氣氛也佳, 一吃後就餓了
讚! 好吃!

P.S. McCauley: diction (writing, speaking) to the point + fluency to be improved